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18.02.2010

Grünes Gras, glitzernde Tautropfen, der Geruch von Heu. Schmetterlinge die leichtfüssig von einem Blatt zum nächsten springen, ein kühler Wind der durch die Gräser streicht . Ein Haus das ganz für sich alleine steht . Einsam, morsch, alleine. Warme S... [mehr]
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People don't change


14.02.2010 um 15:54

People don't change, they just pretend they do

cuz deep down inside your soul is a wall

and no matter what, the bricks they won't fall

no matter how you fight and scream,

just because it doesn't seem,

that what is looking back at you in mirrors all around,

is what you think you are yourself, your feet stuck to the ground

so please don't reach your human hands for something you can't grab

the universe is its own plan,

don't try to change, you just don't can

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altamarea 02.03.2010 um 14:33
I bet the first thing you did when you heard "he ain't heavy, he's my brother" was correcting the "ain't", right?
oasis20
oasis20 15.02.2010 um 21:29
well I understand your choice but it spoils the poem because it really is grammatically wrong... but like you said, your poem.
Kathrin24 15.02.2010 um 21:21
Don't you think it sounds way better?!
oasis20
oasis20 15.02.2010 um 17:03
your poem, your rules...
Kathrin24 14.02.2010 um 20:54
, yes you may....but i still won't change it, mr. english teacher ...i call that "artistic freedom"...
oasis20
oasis20 14.02.2010 um 20:09
good ideas and imagery, just a small grammatical correction (if I may). Replace 'you just don't can' (grammatically not correct) with something like 'you just never can'.